I've run across a couple of these in the guide (perhaps due to the transition to database format?)
p. 169, Atari XE - Archon: "It's more fun than Chess because it h[as lots of action...]"
p. 209, C64 - Jumpman Jr.: "...the game taunts you with a little "death dirge" [every time you die...]"
p. 209, C64 - Kickman: "...instead of crap like Facemaker that turns u[p just about everywhere.]"
Here are a couple where I can't tell if there should be more or not:
p. 230, Brown Box: "It was demonstrated to TV manufacturers [?]"
p. 230, Pumping Game Unit: "...a lever that represented a water pump [?]"
If these have already been addressed, feel free to delete this message.