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mmueller
04-22-2009, 02:21 PM
I am creating an animated series in the style of the classic video games I love. It is called Dungeon Force. Have a look and let me know what you think of it. The more exposure the series gets the better chance I have of getting network notice....which would be great. Thanks so much.

Dungeon Force Part 1 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=doZ0VjnjHQE)

More episodes here: Dungeon Force Playlist (http://www.youtube.com/view_play_list?p=7B1C17F82A7C84BB)

NayusDante
04-22-2009, 07:07 PM
It's not bad, but it seems like it's trying to parody the Family Guy art style and writing more than fantasy games. I'd rather see something like this be more game-oriented and break the fourth wall quite often. For example, characters discussing cheat codes, glitches, gameplay problems, etc.

TheRedEye
04-22-2009, 08:27 PM
Not bad! You need to work on your timing though, the intro to 4 and the ending to 5 were WAY too long with no real payoff or "punchline" at the end. The intro to 5 was pushing it too, but not nearly as bad as 4.

Kind of agree that you seem to be taking too much influence from Seth MacFarlane's cartoons, but I may be biased as I don't really enjoy them.