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digitalpress
11-16-2003, 03:06 PM
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digitalpress
11-16-2003, 03:06 PM
Critique the critique!
Rate this review on a scale of 1-10. Please explain your score. Was the review entertaining? Informative? Well-written? All of these things should go toward your critique.
http://www.digitpress.com/reviews/contest/blazinglazers.htm
Kid Fenris
11-16-2003, 05:48 PM
This one's in dire need of some editing, even though I like the reviewer's approach to the game. It there weren't so many typos, I'd score it higher, but as it is, a 5 seems a suitable rating.
Kid Fenris
11-16-2003, 05:48 PM
This one's in dire need of some editing, even though I like the reviewer's approach to the game. It there weren't so many typos, I'd score it higher, but as it is, a 5 seems a suitable rating.
Flack
11-16-2003, 09:07 PM
4.
The average sentence length in formal writing is about 20 words. The first sentence of the review has 46 words. The grammar is the major problem here, as the review actually has a lot of useful information.
Flack
11-16-2003, 09:07 PM
4.
The average sentence length in formal writing is about 20 words. The first sentence of the review has 46 words. The grammar is the major problem here, as the review actually has a lot of useful information.
hamburgler
11-16-2003, 09:26 PM
7 of 10
Noticed a few spelling errors and the sentences were a little too off about the game itself.
hamburgler
11-16-2003, 09:26 PM
7 of 10
Noticed a few spelling errors and the sentences were a little too off about the game itself.
Gamereviewgod
11-16-2003, 11:13 PM
Not bad but they do their point across. 6.
Gamereviewgod
11-16-2003, 11:13 PM
Not bad but they do their point across. 6.
maxlords
11-17-2003, 12:08 AM
6/10. How many games are out there that have no music at all? More than I thought it seems. Really, it's a good review, but needs rewritten and worked on.
maxlords
11-17-2003, 12:08 AM
6/10. How many games are out there that have no music at all? More than I thought it seems. Really, it's a good review, but needs rewritten and worked on.
o2william
11-17-2003, 12:15 AM
This review has some major weaknesses in terms of grammar and sentence structure, but I don't think rating that is the real point of the contest. The review itself isn't bad, just kind of skimpy. More detail about the nature of the weapons and play control is needed.
I say 6/10, higher if it was edited.
o2william
11-17-2003, 12:15 AM
This review has some major weaknesses in terms of grammar and sentence structure, but I don't think rating that is the real point of the contest. The review itself isn't bad, just kind of skimpy. More detail about the nature of the weapons and play control is needed.
I say 6/10, higher if it was edited.
Scoots
11-17-2003, 03:41 PM
Could've been better. There's no excuse for such slopply spelling and grammar.
4/10.
Scoots
11-17-2003, 03:41 PM
Could've been better. There's no excuse for such slopply spelling and grammar.
4/10.
digitalpress
11-24-2003, 06:38 PM
Tonight will be the last batch of "cuts".
If your review isn't locked at midnight tonight, you're entitled to the Digital Press subscription, and your review will be moved onto the main contest site.
Unfortunately, not every review will make it.
This one is getting cut. Low review scores from our judges and forum. Sorry! Thanks for playing though... there are lots more contests coming up :)