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digitalpress
11-16-2003, 03:22 PM
Critique the critique!

Rate this review on a scale of 1-10. Please explain your score. Was the review entertaining? Informative? Well-written? All of these things should go toward your critique.

http://www.digitpress.com/reviews/contest/kirbysadventure.htm
digitalpress
11-16-2003, 03:22 PM
Critique the critique!

Rate this review on a scale of 1-10. Please explain your score. Was the review entertaining? Informative? Well-written? All of these things should go toward your critique.

http://www.digitpress.com/reviews/contest/kirbysadventure.htm
Jorpho
11-16-2003, 05:06 PM
Well, that was brief.

This review could use a lot more exposition. What about Kirby's history or legacy? Just what is it about this game that makes it stand out so much in a crowded field of platformers?

I'll give this a 3/10.
Jorpho
11-16-2003, 05:06 PM
Well, that was brief.

This review could use a lot more exposition. What about Kirby's history or legacy? Just what is it about this game that makes it stand out so much in a crowded field of platformers?

I'll give this a 3/10.
Flack
11-16-2003, 05:12 PM
3.

Too brief, too little detail. In a Kirby review, I think you definitely have to discuss the game's lineage. It doesn't even mention that it's for the NES until the last paragraph.
Flack
11-16-2003, 05:12 PM
3.

Too brief, too little detail. In a Kirby review, I think you definitely have to discuss the game's lineage. It doesn't even mention that it's for the NES until the last paragraph.
TheRedEye
11-16-2003, 05:17 PM
Extremely high scores with almost no justification. Says absolutely nothing unique or even interesting. There isn't even a screenshot here!

I'll hop on the 3 bandwagon, and question why the author would bother submitting this to a contest.

I will add, though, that the author has a decent "voice," and would do well to hone his craft.
TheRedEye
11-16-2003, 05:17 PM
Extremely high scores with almost no justification. Says absolutely nothing unique or even interesting. There isn't even a screenshot here!

I'll hop on the 3 bandwagon, and question why the author would bother submitting this to a contest.

I will add, though, that the author has a decent "voice," and would do well to hone his craft.
Balloon Fight
11-16-2003, 05:49 PM
I will also go on the 3 train. It was to short, and i learned nothing from it, except that the author likes it. My favorite part was when he said pink little bastard.
Balloon Fight
11-16-2003, 05:49 PM
I will also go on the 3 train. It was to short, and i learned nothing from it, except that the author likes it. My favorite part was when he said pink little bastard.
maxlords
11-17-2003, 01:42 AM
What's KA? Is that Ka-Tet from the Dark Tower books? Why abbreviate the game at all? Essentially no review at all, no good information. Just...nothing. 3/10 is the wave of the future here baby.
maxlords
11-17-2003, 01:42 AM
What's KA? Is that Ka-Tet from the Dark Tower books? Why abbreviate the game at all? Essentially no review at all, no good information. Just...nothing. 3/10 is the wave of the future here baby.
hamburgler
11-17-2003, 07:00 PM
3 of 10

Not enough info on the game itself and how it plays out.
digitalpress
11-20-2003, 07:36 AM
This one is getting "cut". Low review scores from our judges and forum. Sorry! Thanks for playing though... there are lots more contests coming up :)