My First Review

[Captain Qb]

Ok, please comments and credits of this N64 game review.

Legend of Zelda - Majoras Mask (http://rr.ign64.ign.com/rr/001933/039/039584.html)

And, please rate that review. Thanks ^.^

[jajaja]

Im no expert on reviews, but i find this review alittle short. You jump from the start of the game and straight to the last boss. You could have written alittle more about the story and gameplay. You could also have written alittle more about the "3 days to beat it" part. I've only tried the game for 5 minutes myself so i dont know what it is.

Other than this its decent :)

[bangtango]

I've written video game reviews before. Since you want feedback, I'd suggest two things:

-Not offering any spoilers. Having never played this Zelda game, I had no idea who the final boss was. That is part of the fun of playing all the way through. Some people don't like having that given away.
-Letting us know more about the graphics, sound and gameplay. That part was very short.

Aside from that, I'd say you should keep on writing them. You did a good job on this, considering it is your first game review. After you've done a few, they tend to get even better.

Hope that helps.[/i]

[jajaja]

Indeed, keep working and you will get better and better :)

[Captain Qb]

Thanks for the comments.. ^.^