Hey guys I just made my second review. I would love it if you could give me some feedback. Enjoy!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PrxQgeGtNdI
Hey guys I just made my second review. I would love it if you could give me some feedback. Enjoy!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PrxQgeGtNdI
A pink bathrobe, mario mustache, and bandanna? What's with all these gimmicky youtubers? It's 2016. That shit was played out years ago. It's not funny. Try focusing on the game and be yourself. The editing seemed pretty good, even though the "comedy" made no sense.
After two minutes, not a single descriptor of the game itself and how it plays is mentioned. It's way over the top in ways that aren't even slightly funny. If I wasn't already more than familiar with the game, I'd still be clueless by that mark, though I have been told to go fuck myself, so there's that. Like FieryReign said, good editing, but the writing and content aren't just bad, they're embarassingly bad. Not funny, not clever, not creative, but insultingly bad. Use your ability to create good production values to put something better written out there that has a reason to exist, and maybe don't use the crutches of random costumes, characters, and cursing to create something that isn't only uninformative, but feels like a sophomoric waste of time that assumes a very stupid audience.
In order to review a game you need something you don't have - intelligence. Intelligence is also a requirement to be funny.
This video is described with three words: dumb and embarrassing.