yeah, try not to swear as much. Someone who swears every other word is not really taken seriously. you can still be funny and not swear and in the end, THAT takes more creativity then just saying "this game is like (insert animal here) shit"
Also, when you constantly say "as the angry video game nerd always says..." or mentioning that your inspired by the AVGN, doesn't help. It just draws attention to the fact that you really are just trying to rip him off.
To be totally honest, AVGN isn't as funny to me anymore. At first he was so funny...now...I'm bored, Its just the same poop jokes over and over again.
